Final Product: Feedback

The feedback from my target audience was fairly positive, with compliments on the "use of light and visual contrast" and the "optimistic ending", but there was a lot of mentions of the lack of miming and some of the audience suggested that using performance footage with the lack of any miming created a jarring effect on the video. I will try to address this with a revised edit of the video in which I hope to make the video feel like it compliments the video, rather than creating a nasty contrast.